Since both kids and adults will be visiting my website, I’ve divided this page into two parts. Kids will get plenty of information right here, but if you’re an adult writer, you might want to scroll down to get all the juicy details of my writing process.
Click here to read a transcript of a live web chat about my writing journey! http://www.institutechildrenslit.com/rx/tr01/ferber2006.shtml

When I was ten years old my Aunt Julie gave me a red checked diary for Hanukkah. At first I had no idea what to write in it, so I recorded what I ate (Froot Loops for breakfast, peanut butter and Fluff for lunch, skirt steak for dinner), what I received for Hanukkah (Sea Monkeys, three records, gold earrings that were too grown-up for me), and all the swear words I knew (I’ll leave those up to your imagination!). Eventually I wrote about more important things like my family, my friends, my anxieties, dreams, and wishes. I was amazed at the power of writing. Problems became manageable as soon as I wrote them down. Memories became concrete. Life became clear. I was hooked.
If I could give one piece of advice to you, it would be to write in a journal. You don’t have to write every day, but you should write as often as possible. By recording your innermost thoughts and feelings, you will learn about yourself and the world around you in an eye-opening way. You’ll become comfortable expressing yourself with words. That will help in school and in life.
Okay, so say you already write in a journal, are you reading, too? Read as much as possible. Read all kinds of books: poetry, fantasy, historical fiction, biographies, contemporary fiction, etc. If you find an author you like, read everything by that author. Then move on to someone new. If you’d like some book suggestions, click here. Read books more than once. The first time, read for pleasure. But when you re-read a great book, read it slower and think about what the author has done to make you feel the way you do. By doing that, you’ll become a critical reader. And that’s the first step to becoming an excellent writer.
There are many opportunities for you to write and share your stories and poems. You probably already write stories at school. Write more for extra credit! Maybe you can find a group of friends who all love to write. You can form a critique group where you share your writing and help each other to make your work even better. You can make copies of your stories and distribute them to family and friends. You might even want to try to get your stories or poems published in a magazine. Here are some magazines that you could investigate:
Merlyn’s Pen: Fiction, Essays, and Poems by America’s Teens www.merlynspen.org
New Moon: The Magazine for Girls and Their Dreams www.newmoon.org
Potluck Children’s Literary Magazine www.potluckmagazine.org
Skipping Stones www.skippingstones.org
Stone Soup, The Magazine by Young Writers and Artists www.stonesoup.com
The Writers’ Slate www.writingconference.com
The most important thing to remember about writing is to have fun!

It seems as if everywhere you turn there’s another class about writing for children. Many of them are wonderful. I took two classes through the Institute of Children’s Literature (www.institutechildrenslit.com), and they both helped me immensely. I’ve also taken advantage of local workshops and the wealth of information on the web. But one of my favorite authors, Linda Sue Park, imparted her wise advice about writing classes. She was speaking at the SCBWI-NY conference in 2003, and she said (I’m paraphrasing here) that she had been lucky enough to find the most amazing writing teachers: E.B. White, Lois Lowry, and Katherine Paterson to name a few. She didn’t pay anything for the classes. They were offered free to everyone with a library card.
By critically reading books from outstanding authors, we can all learn how to craft compelling stories. If you want to write, you need to read, read, and read some more. Read across genres. Read everything by authors you love. Read classics. Read the newest releases. If a book doesn’t work for you, figure out why. If a book does work, read it again and analyze how the author has succeeded. Ask yourself these questions:
What kind of descriptive details does the author include?
What does the author show you to make you like certain characters and not like others?
In the first chapter, has the author laid the ground work for the rest of the story?
How often does the author use dialogue?
What is the main plot of the story?
What is the subplot of the story?
How does the author interweave the main plot and the subplot? Are they related?
How does the author divide the chapters?
Why do you want to keep turning the page?
What is the message of the story?
How does the author surprise you?
How does the author build tension?
You might want to take a look at my reading page for some suggestions of outstanding fiction for young readers.
Besides reading, I tell all my adult friends who want to write for children that they should do two things: Join the Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators. (www.scbwi.org.), and find an excellent critique group. This should be a group of dedicated children’s writers who will honestly appraise your work and push you to go further, dig deeper, and aim higher with every sentence you write. I was lucky enough to meet up with Carol Grannick, a talented author and critic, back in 2002 when I began work on Julia’s Kitchen. Though we were both beginners when we met, we shared an optimistic determination to create fiction that would stand shoulder to shoulder with our favorite authors. We recently were joined by Jenny Meyerhoff, a former kindergarten teacher who will undoubtedly make a splash in the children’s book world with her upcoming work.
How I Wrote Julia’s Kitchen:
There are as many different ways to write a novel as there are novelists. I can only tell you what I do.
The idea comes first. All my ideas come from the same place… real life. I just add a little imagination by asking “what if” questions. I start thinking, and soon I have a story.
I write directly on a keyboard. I can’t think as clearly with a pen and paper.
I start with an outline. I know my beginning, middle, climax and end before I ever start to write.
I create characters before I start to write the story. I make up all sorts of stuff about them that will often change as I write. I also sketch pictures of my main characters so they seem more real to me. Even though I’m not an artist, these doodles really help me!
I try to write a few hours every day. If I skip too many days, I get very cranky, and my family suffers. Then I spend a whole day ignoring the laundry, the groceries, the to-do lists, everything. I just write all day, and my body and mind thank me for it. (So does my family!)
I meet with my critique group every other week and give them a new chapter each time. I can’t say enough about my critique group. Knowing I have to give them the next chapter every two weeks keeps me going, and their feedback is invaluable.
After critique, I’ll spend a day revising the chapter I submitted, but I won’t obsess over making it perfect. It’s still a first draft, and I know I have to get to the end.
Once I finish the first draft, I give the entire manuscript to my critique group to read. At this point, I usually think the story is terrible and that I’ve wasted a year of my life!
Which leads me to revisions. Ah… revisions. My favorite part of writing. As opposed to staring at a blank screen, I can now look at something and make it better. Everything changes. I create a computer file called “Cuts,” and I put all the parts that need to be cut in that file. It’s too traumatic to simply delete my beautiful sentences! I revise and revise and revise. I revise for clarity, character, story, and language. For Julia’s Kitchen, I wrote four full drafts before I submitted it to FSG.
Once the manuscript is as good as I can make it, my editor reads it and sends it back to me with questions all over it. Almost every page has a question, and it’s my job to answer them in the next revision. To keep track of all these changes, I use post-its. I start by giving each scene a plain yellow post-it. Then I use color coded post-its to indicate changes that need to be made, scenes to delete, scenes to add, things that need to be explained or changed, etc. With this post-it map, I’m able to revise scene by scene without losing my mind.
After this revision is approved by my editor, we move on to line editing and copy editing where we make sure every word, every punctuation mark, every single detail is as it should be. Whew! Finally, the book comes out, and children everywhere have the chance to read about these characters and this story that started out as a little idea in my head. Pretty cool! |